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Maybe the zero voters would like it better if there was more nudity. Dunno. Was pretty good. Especially for a first submission and ESPECIALLY for a first attempt in flash. I've worked in flash only a little bit and i didnt like it much. So good on ya. maybe some more audio on the clown. maybe a rasping or breathing sound. Or maybe you left any sound for him out on purpose I don't know. Overall nice graphics. good animation. maybe work a bit on making the joints a bit more seamless. Not saying they were a bad job or anything. just saying thats the one point i can find that might need improvement. Hope to see more form you soon.

JohnDavidHeptinstall responds:

Yeah I actually recorded a raspy breath and a choke for when he wakes - but it just didn't seem to fit - and I didn't have the time to redo it really - And yeah I've just started work on my 2nd animation and am hopefully eliminating all problems like that - thanks!

I animate in Flash and 3D programs alike.

Kregar @Gen-Disarray

Age 43, Male

Digital Arts & Film

Durham

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