lame. No point to make. No point in watching.
I used to write reviews for videos....
but then I still do. good overall. reminds me of Harry Partridge style.
I like this. Reminds me of Saturday morning cartoons before they got crappy and all full of learning stuff. I hope this becomes a series. I really do.
I've played the game and often came across weird funny things aside from the drawings in his book. There was so much potential for thing in the game and you barely scraped the tip of it. The crazy driving, the random doubt/being an asshole to witnesses and suspects and stuff. a lot. it was ok. i hope this gets revisited when you get more time available to spend on it.
Man. Using acid instead of something like pepper spray is pretty original and has a lot of comedic value. Hmmm. I guess sarcasm doesn't communicate well through text. Nevermind then. The joke was obvious. The graphics were mediocre at best and the voice acting pretty much sounded like you're recording in your bedroom but trying not to wake your parents up. So yeah. Not so much front page material I don't think. Maybe page 12 continued on page 20 after the classified ads. The 4 is just for taking time out of your life to upload something that doesn't make loud piercing noises and flash colour in my face.
lmao. so true.
Graphics were so-so. voice acting was pretty bad. Maybe ask friends to help out next time so you don't just have lame voice effects and accents.
Maybe the zero voters would like it better if there was more nudity. Dunno. Was pretty good. Especially for a first submission and ESPECIALLY for a first attempt in flash. I've worked in flash only a little bit and i didnt like it much. So good on ya. maybe some more audio on the clown. maybe a rasping or breathing sound. Or maybe you left any sound for him out on purpose I don't know. Overall nice graphics. good animation. maybe work a bit on making the joints a bit more seamless. Not saying they were a bad job or anything. just saying thats the one point i can find that might need improvement. Hope to see more form you soon.
Yeah I actually recorded a raspy breath and a choke for when he wakes - but it just didn't seem to fit - and I didn't have the time to redo it really - And yeah I've just started work on my 2nd animation and am hopefully eliminating all problems like that - thanks!
It was a nice idea and execution. How much experience do you have with Maya? I think you need just a hint more antic in your moves and some over shoot. Mime hands are all over the place before they actually pretend to touch something solid. I didn't mind the texturing though. I just assume its supposed to be a simple cartoon style and not really a realistic style. The quality of your texturing really relies on what feel you were going for. One thing i noticed that's probably just a personal thought, i would have like to see some swinging along with the rotate Y you had going on there. Just minor details. I like it though. I'm glad to see some 3D on Newgrounds.
I can't believe how randomly funny this was. That dancing cat thing was hilarious. Aside from the voice/lip sync it was very well done. Amazing job.
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